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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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But that isn't the top and I have to break free from that strong highlight to travel up the rest of the stairway. I'm not really sure if that's necessary to tell the story. I'd take a shot at cropping just to the left of that third window. It competes with that highlight at the lower-left for my initial attention. At the very least the window on the far-right should be cropped out as it's a distraction and doesn't really add anything to the view. I'd also clip that little bit of window above the main highlighted window just to clean things up a bit more.
Last little nit-pick is that, cropping out that right-window but keeping the third one in the image, I'd use the crop tool to straighten that window. As it is now it's leaning off to the right. Using a wide-angle lens will create these little distortions so cleaning them up help make the image for natural-looking.
Hope this helps. Really fine work, I do like it a lot.
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